| A Waiting Heart Robert Hahn Sally’s
Hair
John Koethe
HarperCollins, $24.95 (cloth)
8 Although
his career spans nearly 40 years, it is only recently, with the
much-praised collections Falling Water (1997), The
Constructor (1999), and North Point North: New and Selected
Poems (2002), that John Koethe’s work has begun to
receive wider recognition. Even readers unfamiliar with Koethe
will appreciate his new collection, Sally’s Hair,
for its uneasy pairing of the immediate with the remote, the quotidian
with the sublime, and the banal with the beautiful. They will
also notice psychological inquiries pursued with startling depth
beneath neutral, discursive surfaces composed of shifting registers
of speech.
As critics have trained their sights on Koethe, they have focused on his
relation to John Ashbery, Wallace Stevens, and Romanticism, and they
have sometimes labeled him a Wordsworthian. To this we can add
Proustian, since his long poems—including the title poem and
another called, appropriately, “Proust”—frequently present
inner journeys that wind back into memory. Yet Koethe is skeptical
about the past: his reconnaissance expeditions produce vacant stares
as often as epiphanies, and they recollect the past in states more
troubled than tranquil. Koethe’s inquiry into the nature of
consciousness is intense and relentless, and perhaps for that very
reason it often leads to “a blank space,” “an inhuman world /
Indifferent to desire,” a vision where “nothing seemed
revealed,” unless it is “the indifferent truth that lies behind
the seeming.”
The dream of inquiry is to pierce the veil,
to see to the bottom of things, to achieve an understanding that is
if not quite absolute then at least adequate. Koethe has an old-time
faith in the power of literature to achieve this dream, and there are
flashes in his poetry that make us feel for a moment that such
revelations are possible. Still, the prevailing note of this book is
doleful:
Like a vain man practicing a vain art
Born out of failure—not the grand failure
Of the Will or the Imagination,
But on a more human scale: what happened?
What happened to the incidental life
You try to make up, though it falls apart?
Each year I come again to where I am.
These are the opening lines of “The
Unlasting,” the book’s long central poem, a masterpiece that
rivals Schuyler’s “The Day of the Poem” and which, like it,
spans the day of its own writing. Reflecting the passage of thought
in time, the poem’s continuously looping eddies return the poet,
240 lines later, to
An odd place, yet one I must have
chosen
Long ago, like a promise time fulfills
In passing, that comes too late, that leaves me
Floating in the air between a fleeting
Glimpse of nothing and the common knowledge
That lay waiting for me beyond the hills.
Along the way there are moments of doubt (“I feel
like someone waiting to begin / A story without a real ending”) and
dismissal (“That what I felt once I might feel again / —A fallacy
completely obvious”), ringing assertions (“time . . . / Is
impotent against the will of art”) and illuminations (“an
afternoon that seems a vast / Cathedral brimming with an earthly
light”). Any given mood slides into its opposite, now verging on
magic and mystery, now yielding to banality and boredom, settling for
a chastened bemusement:
There is an air of unreality
About this place, as though I looked at it
Through someone else’s eyes. And what I see
Is nothing but an ordinary day
Transformed, unlike all those I’ve known before,
And so strange. And I think it’s
wonderful.
These two stanzas are quintessential Koethe,
with their shifts and feints and odd juxtapositions under surface
simplicities. “Nothing but an ordinary day / Transformed” sounds
plain enough, but what is an ordinary day that has been transformed
and yet remains ordinary? With the hovering, contentious meanings of
that final, flat declaration, Koethe couches his philosophizing in
plain, almost prosaic language, so lacking in grace notes that some
readers will hardly hear it as poetry.
Yet Koethe’s
language can be beautiful in its austere and unassuming way. Koethe
is continually testing one of his most important and distinctive
hypotheses: that prosaic, propositional language can be the stuff of
poetry quite as much as the genre’s traditional material. If he
succeeds, it is not simply because one tolerates such chewy,
torturous expositions as these lines (from “A Tulip
Tree”)—
Why should the myth of naturalness hold sway, the cult of
Authenticity prevail when accident
and artifice Can both be equally
untrue to what we feel and mean?
—but because they are so often leavened by an
intimate, conversational tone whose credibility compensates for an
absence of drama, or because Koethe summons the nuances that swim
beneath the surface of bland diction in a way that recalls the
layering of a film’s soundtrack. If we stay to see the credits, we
notice songs listed that we don’t recall hearing, and listening to
Koethe is a matter of hearing those songs, their samplings, their
savor and snap, their pop ambiance, their corniness. In “Eros and
the Everyday,” a title more fit for a scholarly essay than for a
poem, we read, “What is this thing that feels at once so nebulous /
And so complete, living from day to day / Unmindful of itself,
oblivious”—lines that would seem dry and stuffy except that
beneath them we hear a hint of Cole Porter’s “What Is This Thing
Called Love?” It is this counterpoint of the austere and the
sentimental, of the dour philosopher and the popular songwriter, that
encourages Koethe to slip in details that are intimate and
self-consciously trivial (“The dinner, the DVD from Netflix, / The
drink before I go to sleep”). But such low-key reportage is quite
the opposite of the dramatized self-assertion we find in Confessional
poetry. Koethe offers the self as a clinical case-study, suggesting
that most of our lives are exactly this ordinary and proposing that
any life, looked at as directly as possible, illuminates the
universal life, the experience of being a conscious human—an
experience less distinctive than we care to think, and doomed to fade
into oblivion.
Though Koethe is not particularly old as
poets go, his poetry is by now a poetry of aging, for which a
Proustian lens comes in handy: the more we age, the more past we have
to sift through, and there is always a madeleine—a snatch of music,
a fragrance, a taste—to dredge it up. Koethe’s madeleine is a
spill of light on a bright summer day that, in the title poem,
recalls the blond hair of a girl named Sally and a youthful
dalliance. Other promptings carry him back to his parents’ home in
California (“The Middle of Experience”), his youth as a
high-school track star (“21.1”), and his days as a graduate
student in philosophy at Harvard (“16A:”). Following these leads
produces poems that are more entertaining—and amusing—than many
in his earlier books. They are also more topical, as the poet turns
his attention to the war in Iraq and the economic impact of Wal-Mart,
among other subjects.
But the best poems in Sally’s Hair are the meditative, meandering excursions for which Koethe is known, and the most important of these is the concluding poem, “Hamlet” (which first appeared in these pages), in which the dream of personal ambition modulates into the dream of scientific or mathematical breakthrough, of a theory that provides a new explanation of reality, although it may be only “a naïve / fantasy of knowledge.” Shakespeare’s Hamlet, in this poem’s reading, casts doubt on the assumption that we are capable of planning our lives, let alone achieving our dreams, leading the poet to fear that his Proustian quest to discover the logic of a recollected life is equally doomed. By the poem’s
end, Koethe is weighing his own accomplishments, asking where his
life has brought him, finding “nothing tangible to see.” But
because his enterprise is not over—more poems wait in the
wings—he concludes, “And so I / Bide my time,” repeating a
theme introduced 80 pages earlier, at the end of the book’s second
poem:
I came here for the view, and what is there to see?
The place is still a place in progress
And the days have the feeling of fiction, of pages
Blank with anticipation, biding their time,
And ever approaching the chapter in the story
Where it ends, and my heart is waiting.
The end of the story is not likely to be happy,
not when it comes in the present, with its “Disappointment all the
deeper that the / Hope was for a thing I knew to be unreal” (from
“This Morning”); nor in the past, which the philosopher recalls
as full of “Idiotic questions / That fascinated once / And now seem
frivolous” (from “In the Dark”); nor in what we like to think
of as the future, where “by the time we / Glimpse the possibility
of changing it’s already happened” (from “Hamlet”). But while these snippets can sound merely gloomy, Koethe’s book as a whole is strangely fulfilling, as Aristotle proposed tragedy should be, even if here, as in Hamlet, the wrecks of the hero’s hopes and dreams lie scattered about the stage. Sally’s Hair is in fact a highly readable book, appealing in its elusive and somewhat eerie blend of the personal and impersonal, and compelling in the rigor of its inquiry into the human condition.
Rigorous though it may be, it is
the inquiry of a poet, not a scientist (which Koethe meant to
be) or a philosopher (which Koethe is). Philosophical notions
and vocabularies are common in poetry—Wallace Stevens has
a philosophical air about him, and T.S. Eliot manages to sound
like a philosopher in Four Quartets—but Koethe
is the real thing, a professional philosopher who has published
important volumes on epistemology and Wittgenstein. But while
it is useful to know this about Koethe, it does not tell us how
to read his poetry. There are moments when Koethe, waxing abstract,
seems philosophical in the formal sense, as he does in these lines
from “A Tulip Tree”: “Call it a place of freedom,
/ But its beauty is the beauty of the question / Of a different
life . . .” But even with the occasional suggestion of a
severe, Wittgensteinian restriction on the use and meaning of
words, Koethe’s poetry is ultimately lyrical, and its claim
on us comes not from philosophy’s dream of precision but
from the common human dream that our lives make some kind of sense.
What Koethe offers is not ideas but a weave of reflection, emotion,
and music; what he creates is art—a bleak, harrowing art
in all it chooses to confront, but one whose rituals and repetitions
contain the hope of renewal. <
Robert Hahn's
most recent poetry collections are All Clear and No
Messages. His essays and translations of Italian poetry have
recently appreared in Michigan Quarterly Review, Kenyon
Review, and The Literary Review.
Originally published in the May/June
2006 issue of Boston Review |