Hate Mail



You are a whore. You are an old whore.
Everyone hates you. God hates you.
He pretty much has had it with all women

But, let me tell you, especially you. You like
To think that you can think faster than
The rest of us—hah! We drive the car

In which you’re a crash dummy! So
Why do you defy our Executive Committee
Which will never cede its floor to you? If a pig

Flew out of a tree & rose to become
A blimp—you would write a poem
About it, ignoring the Greater Good,

The hard facts of gravity. You deserve to be
Flattened by the Greater Good—pigs don’t
Fly, yet your arrogance is that of a blimp

Which has long forgotten its place on this earth.
Big arrogance unmoored from its launch pad
Floating free, up with mangy Canadian honkers,

Up with the spy satellites and the ruined
Ozone layer which is, btw, caused by your breath,
Because you were born to ruin everything, hacking

Into the inspiration of the normal human ego.
You are not Queen Tut, honey, you are not
Even a peasant bar-maid, you are an aristocrat

Of Trash, landmine of exploding rhinestones,
Crown of thorns, cabal of screech-bats!
I am telling you this as an old friend,

Who is offering advice for your own good—
Change now or we will have to Take Measures—
If you know what I mean, which you do—

& now let’s hear one of your fucked-up poems:
let’s hear you refute this truth any way you can.


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Comments

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Re: Hate Mail
Passionate poem. Brilliant use of language. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
— posted 05/30/2011 at 09:06 by Ego
2 |
Re: Hate Mail
Amusing. It made me think of a tea-party tempest -- steaming.
— posted 05/30/2011 at 19:13 by Russell
3 |
Ironically Enjoyable
The language is pithy, but enjoyable. The point of view is yet to be taken through the lens of the reader's individual choice.
— posted 06/01/2011 at 11:02 by Dulal Al Monsur
4 |
Thoughtful review of this piece and publication policy for poetry in general at SHARKPACK: http://sharkpackpoetry.com/2011/06/02/carol-muske-dukes-hate-mail/
— posted 06/03/2011 at 13:00 by James
5 |
An intriguing gambit. Self-insult checkers or chess, or an attempt at inhabiting the throne of scorn, Queen of Hearts in a house of cards. I'm a little uneasy with the "Executive Committee" language, simply because it lacks the crushing arrogance and extravagant brutality that I have witnessed from actual totalitarian courts, in such places as China or Saudi Arabia. If a poet were dragged before such a court, there would be no playfulness or flirting in the dispensation of power-- such "authority" does not care for dialogue, or any other engagement which might call it into question. Simply put, the Executive Committee would reduce you to a symbol of their contempt, perhaps with a sign around your neck which reads, "Class Traitor", a heavy wooden sign suspended from a metal wire around your neck which cuts at you so that the blood runs down your shirt, and then you stumble forward through a crowd that is laughing and screaming at you, and then you are made to get on your knees and beg for a forgiveness which will never be granted. Critics love to slap and flirt-- authoritarian regimes, not so much. But otherwise a very interesting poem. Snarky voice in my heads says, in a voice that sounds suspiciously like that of Andy Warhol: "Hardly anybody cares enough about anything to really "hate it", hatred is just the new performance to get noticed, the same way loving used to be."
— posted 02/01/2012 at 19:23 by Brendan Smart
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About the Author

Carol Muske-Dukes is Poet Laureate of California and author of eight books of poems, including the forthcoming Twin Cities.

Caitlin Dube,
Frog and Toe

Cynthia Arrieu-King and Ariana-Sophia Kartsonis,
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