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We Need to Tell the Africa Story Differently

Ken Harper


In 1906, the readers of The New York Times opened their papers to a story about the Bronx Zoo’s latest attraction: Ota Benga, a 22-year-old Mutwa from today’s Democratic Republic of the Congo.

“Ota Benga let some of the savage nature of the African forest come out yesterday,” began the story, in which Benga is drenched with a hose in the zoo’s monkey cage.

Today, the “savage nature” of Africa is still on display, in American headlines: “Uganda’s rebels in murderous spree,” “Congo a country of rape and ruin” “Africa’s Forever Wars.” Sometimes the savagery doesn’t come from the “savages” themselves. It comes from poverty—“NIGERIA: Focus on the scourge of poverty”—or disease—“AIDS at 30: Killer has been tamed, but not conquered.” Other times, all the savagery blends together: “Starving Babies, Raped Mommies, Famine in Africa—Do you care?

All I can imagine from these headlines is that Africa—all 54 countries, all 11.7 million square miles of it—must be a very deadly place.

But I’ve lived there. It’s not. Or rather, it can be, in certain places, at certain times. Far more often, and across most of the continent, it isn’t. Not even in its most infamous “war-torn” countries, such as the Democratic Republic of Congo. In Goma, part of a region the United Nations’ special representative on sexual violence in conflict Margot Wallström two years ago dubbed “the rape capital of the world,” I went to an impromptu hip-hop show, full of dancing Congolese. In Kinshasa, nearly a thousand miles away on the other side of the country, I met an oboist for the city’s symphony orchestra.

Congo, like America, is very many things, all at the same time. This should be obvious. Why would a foreign country be any less complex than our own? So why, then, if you’re reading or watching most American news, do you tend to see the same simplified stories over and over again?



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“I used to joke—and I want to emphasize this is a joke—that you could write that you’d wandered into some obscure backwater in Africa where people had three ears,” Howard French, former Africa correspondent for The New York Times, once told me. “If it’s not literally true you can get away with that, it’s figuratively true that you can.”

Journalists in Africa talk often about misrepresentations of the continent we cover. But this isn’t an easy conversation: we’re all far from home, working for pennies, because we care about what we do. Broad criticism of our profession can feel personal. Often, even though we’re ostensibly in charge of the story, we feel disempowered. The best journalism takes time and money, and often, we complain, we have neither. Travel budgets have shrunk, and the Internet demands ever more content.

But this doesn’t explain why journalism from Africa looks and sounds as it does. For this, we blame our editors, who (we like to say) oversimplify our copy and cut out context. They also introduce clichéd shorthand, such as “Arab north versus Christian and animist south” (Sudan), or boilerplate background, such as “the 1994 genocide, in which 800,000 Tutsis and moderate Hutus were killed” (Rwanda). Virtually any story can be sold more easily if set in a “war-torn country.”

For these tendencies, our editors in turn often blame readers, whom they assume can’t or won’t follow us through villages with difficult-to-pronounce names or narratives with nuanced conclusions or moral ambiguities.

Ultimately, the problem with journalism from Africa isn’t about professional conventions. It’s about all of us—writers and readers, producers and viewers. We continue a storytelling tradition that hasn’t fundamentally changed since Joseph Conrad slapped Congo with “the heart of darkness” label. Even stories that gesture toward something “positive” can’t escape the dominant narrative: “Africa isn’t a lost cause,” pleads one recent headline.

The argument about journalism from Africa is often whittled into two camps, Afro-pessimists vs. Afro-optimists. But these binary camps, too, miss that Africa is many complex things, simultaneously. In our news broadcasts and our headlines, though, it’s usually framed by just one static thing: suffering.



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“It’s easy to write what people expect, and for people to be satisfied with that, because they get to cry over the famine or the children,” Stephanie McCrummen, who spent three and a half years based in Nairobi for The Washington Post, told me. “Those kinds of stories can be one-dimensional, like people have no life besides this generalized suffering.”

Nearly every story I published from Rwanda in my three years reporting there included a reference to the 1994 genocide. Dredging up suffering can win a busy audience’s attention, but it’s a limited kind of attention. It’s the attention of the kind-hearted stranger from a distance, the reader who stops eating his breakfast or reading her stock quotes to remember just how bad it is in other places.

Being an object of compassion is not the same thing as being the subject of a story.

Drawing attention to suffering certainly is crucial work. But that attention is more about our preoccupation with stories of suffering than it is about Africa. That’s what Nigerian and American novelist Teju Cole meant when he assailed our monothematic obsession with Africa’s plight, framed by a desire to help, the “white savior industrial complex.”

But there is a deeper problem, I think, that has not been sufficiently acknowledged. Since its first encounters with the continent, suffering is all the West has known of Africa. We’ve caused much of it—centuries of slave trade, followed by a near-century of colonialism and its attendant physical and structural violence, from the rubber fields of the Belgian Congo to the internment camps of British Kenya. But it’s also been our narrative preoccupation.

In his contribution to the book Humanitarianism and Suffering (2011), historian Thomas Laqueur charts the birth of “the sentimental narrative” and its role in changing hearts and inspiring action. “In the late eighteenth century,” he writes, “the ethical subject was democratized; more and more people came to believe it was their obligation to ameliorate and prevent wrongdoing to others.”

The sentimental narrative Laqueur identifies is a sneaky one. Superficially, it seems humane, a good-hearted response to the impoverished and their plight. But it also objectifies the sufferers it nominally empowers—people with pain to ameliorate, against whom wrongdoings are to be prevented, on whose behalf this compassion is to be invested. However many noble or real or useful things that investment may bring, it also flatters us, by affirming our own righteousness.

Jina Moore

In the late eighteenth century, abolitionists deployed this emerging compassion and its narratives to great effect. For instance, one important moment in Britain’s anti-slavery movement was the Jamaican slave revolt of 1831. The brutal British response to the rebellion fueled abolitionists. But not, as Adam Hochschild points out in Bury the Chains (2005), because the abolitionists objected to the murder of slaves. Instead, they worried about the white missionaries whose churches the authorities burned in retaliation for congregants’ abolitionist sympathies. In public lectures and parliamentary sessions, witnesses’ stories roused slavery’s opponents by describing violence against well-meaning white Brits, not against black slaves. As Hochschild puts it, the missionaries “edged out the hundreds of dead slaves for the role of martyrs.”

Even if this is a “democratization” of storytelling, it misses an undemocratic truth, one also at the core of our narrow understanding of Africa: being an object of compassion is not the same thing as being the subject of a story. It wasn’t then, and it isn’t now. In American newspapers and on American TV, Africans remain objects—of violence, of poverty, of disease, and ultimately of our own compassion. Like the abolitionists’ stories of the Jamaican slave revolt, our compassion narratives ultimately are not about the people in whose name they are told. They are about us. We like these stories because at some level, we already know them, and because they tell us we are caring, and potentially powerful, people.



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This vanity has consequences. Media attention influences donor attention toward certain interests—and therefore away from others. For example, media and donor obsession with sexual violence in eastern Congo has made rape allegations a “survival strategy,” according to Maria Eriksson Baaz and Maria Stern in their 2010 study for Sweden’s Nordic Africa Institute. In villages where most people are poor but donors provide free health care and other services to rape survivors, they argue, there is a strong incentive to identify oneself as a victim.

There are also economic consequences, for Africans as well as Americans. “If you are reading a steady diet about East Africa, for example, that consists of nothing but warfare and chaos,” said French, “you will not think the region has anything to do with opportunity for you, if you are an American business person.”

It isn’t only readers who might miss the mark. If you publish a steady diet of warfare, you might fall prey to similarly myopic thinking. Though hundreds of stories with exotic datelines have been written about Africans who live on less than a two dollars a day, the news approach to improving poverty has been different. When the World Bank announced in March that global poverty had already fallen by half—five years ahead of the United Nations’ Millennium Development Goals deadline—economic reporters in Washington, D.C. and New York dutifully wrote up the study. But who are the people now living on, say, four or even fourteen dollars a day, instead of two, and what do their lives look like? We don’t know yet. And if you’ve read anything in the last year about the burgeoning African economy—growing regional markets, increased manufacturing and infrastructure, soaring levels of foreign investment—it was probably about China’s bid for the continent, a story at heart more about our economic rival than about Africa.

You might also fall prey to this narrow thinking if you only cover the warfare-and-chaos beat. Jeffrey Gettleman, the Times’s East Africa bureau chief and winner of the 2012 Pulitzer Prize in International Reporting, admits he consciously chooses those stories. “There’s obviously distinct cultures [in Africa] and I don’t write that much about them,” he said in a talk sponsored by the Committee to Protect Journalists. “I try to balance them, but I feel guilty if I know there’s something really bad happening in Sudan or in Congo—I feel bad, I feel like I’m neglecting an opportunity to help people or to shed a light on people who are really in danger or in fear or in distress if I go and spend a week on some music story or an education story or something.”

The problem with American news about Africa isn’t foreign writers. It’s the narrow American imagination.

He’s right, of course, that stories of violence deserve our attention. But this is also a false choice. We can write about suffering and we can write about the many other things there are to say about Congo. With a little faith in our readers, we can even write about both things—extraordinary violence and ordinary life—in the same story.

What I’ve described are stories most journalists would like to pursue, if only it weren’t for this or that pressing concern. As long as we think of this kind of work as a luxury, though, it isn’t likely to get done. But if we normalize it—if we don’t think that we need three months and a multi-part series to get at the multi-faceted lives in the places we go—maybe it needn’t feel like a luxury, either.

“We should be proposing and pitching compelling stories about people we haven’t heard, or read, or seen,” says Ofeibea Quist-Arcton, National Public Radio’s Africa correspondent, based in Dakar. “Perhaps the listener will say, ‘Oh, this is Africa?’ Perhaps they’ll just think first, ‘This was a jolly good tale.’”



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In the Internet age, trafficking in stereotypes doesn’t go unnoticed. When CNN framed a story about a grenade explosion at a Nairobi bus stop with the studio backdrop “VIOLENCE IN KENYA,” Kenyans took to Twitter in protest under the hashtag #someonetellcnn. The problem, one blogger wrote, is that “Africa is not telling her own stories on the world platform.”

Representation of Africa is a contentious topic on Twitter and blogs, and a sizable constituency—from Western aid workers and academics to African and diaspora intellectuals and activists—suggests that taking the mic away from foreigners is the best option. In May, political scientist Laura Seay set off a weeks-long debate about journalism from Africa, in part by arguing that local reporters necessarily do better work than any foreign journalist ever could. It’s a suggestion many applauded, if not because it might actually solve the problem, then because it demanded that African voices tell Africa’s stories.

But this distracts from the real problem by assuming that American news is bad because Americans are foreigners, and that natives would tell it better because they’re, well, native. The argument assumes the same thing the eighteenth-century adventurers did: that the Dark Continent can’t ever really be known. It also assumes the same thing colonial governments did: the only way to work with the natives is to impress them into the service of foreigners. This argument isn’t a rejection of colonialism; it’s an embodiment of it.

The problem with American news about Africa isn’t foreign—or, in the race-based shorthand often used in this discussion, white—writers. It’s the narrow American imagination. Bringing African authors into the conversation can help change the paradigm. But American journalists have a responsibility to join in that work. We’ve inherited, and perpetuated, a simplistic narrative, which in turn influences how policymakers, investors, and ordinary, curious Americans see Africa and its possibilities.

Some journalists, of course, master the challenges and do help us imagine something new. “I often had in my head this imagined reader who is accustomed to stories about conflict and sadness,” the Post’s McCrummen said. “I often wanted to write stories that countered that. I got really good responses from those stories, when I could do them. People told me, ‘I had no idea that there was something approaching regular life in ___’—whatever place I was writing about.”

In Regarding the Pain of Others (2004), Susan Sontag describes our problem this way: “The other . . . is regarded only as someone to be seen, not someone (like us) who also sees.” Not, that is, as a subject. We should rethink how we might speak with, and listen to, and ultimately represent Africans as people who, like us, see many things.

The responsibility to change our image of Africa doesn’t lie solely with the few journalists feeding the beast. It also lies with media consumers—readers and listeners and viewers—patronizing our media institutions with money or attention or clicks. Together, we should demand of ourselves that we take an imaginative leap and acknowledge something other than suffering as worthy of our attention. We’ll need assistance from African writers and thinkers and performers who are willing to help us move toward better understanding. But we can’t shoulder them with the burden of undoing the stories we’ve trapped them in. With each new story we read, or we write, we’re obliged to do the hard work of reimagining Africa.


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Comments

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Less use of Africa
Jina this is a very beautiful write up. I have one thing to say. As Kapuscinski pointed out, Africa is so diverse that the real concept of it as an entity does not exist beyond being a mere continent. American journalists also need to free themselves from the burden of being experts on large areas of Africa. I cannot imagine an African writer covering the whole of Eastern Europe for a leading newspaper on the continent.
— posted 08/02/2012 at 21:02 by Allan Brian Ssenyonga
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The author makes an excellent point. A growing Africa means incredible opportunities for investors and business everywhere, especially those who are able to work to scale. If I could, I'd put every dime I had toward African healthcare - and not only because it's the right thing to do. Our focus on the humanitarian needs of the region is obviously ethically important. But that focus so often leads to a sense of "compassion fatigue," and comes at the expense of our ability to imagine, say, a healthy continent with growing economies, which could stimulate trade and economic growth not just for China, but also worldwide. Everyone stands to benefit from a little more imagination. We've seen the region at it's worst, but what might Africa at its best look like?
— posted 08/02/2012 at 21:24 by S Chang
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Reminds me of outstanding TED talk by Chimamanda Adichie
She's the wonderful Nigerian novelist, and her talk is called The Danger of the Single Story.

http://www.ted.com/talks/chimamanda_adichie_the_danger_of_a_single_story.html
— posted 08/02/2012 at 22:09 by Amanda
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the great thing about the internet
Is the democratization of news. I can now read kenyan, ghanaian, south african, and egyptian papers and tv without the sad stories and politically tinged narratives of the post and the times.
— posted 08/02/2012 at 22:20 by steven
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all whites are racists
white americans do everything to demonize Africans using that persistent insult "africa'. which is used to automatically negate our various regional, ethnic identities like we are all a indistiuishable mash of humanity. They talk about the chinese, the french the russians but never ever, Kenyans, moroccans or angolans, just 'africans'. The term africans has become the actual replacement of 'nigger' used in the same way to achieve the same purposes.
— posted 08/03/2012 at 06:29 by mwaf
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correspondent, Dakar-Amsterdam
Spot on analysis. As a West African correspondent originally from the Netherlands I regularly tear my head out when I read the unmitigated tosh that some of our colleagues get away with (and yes, "Africa's Forever Wars" is one that I remember as a particularly egregious examples).

The cure, as I see it, is actually quite simple: behave like proper journalists would behave when reporting in their own home countries. You are not an appendage to an aid organization. You are not on a mission to "change the world", you can leave your messianistic aspirations at home. You are, in short, nothing special, just a journo reporting on a country.

You are there to listen, understand, and report. Working with colleagues who actually live there helps one hell of a lot. Leave the capital. Get the aid industry of your speed dial. Educate your editors who frequently understand Sweet FA about the place where you work. Talk with ordinary people but before you do that, learn to take them seriously.

That's a start.
— posted 08/03/2012 at 09:45 by Bram Posthumus
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re:all whites are racists - not true!!!!
Really inspiring article. I would only like to respond to "mwaf"s very skewed comment. That is absolutely not true, and with that line of thought you hinge on falling into the same category of people who say all blacks are lazy, uncivilised people; ignorant. A broad-sweeping comment like that shows anger and resentment without balanced consideration. I am Ugandan and DO NOT agree with you.
— posted 08/03/2012 at 09:52 by Caesar Oweitu
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There will always be a structuring narrative
I think this is a valid critique, but I don't have a strong sense of what the preferable alternative would look like. I actually don't care about the Kinshasa oboist, just as I don't care about oboists in Miami or LA or Dallas. I mean, if it's a great story then sure, but "guess what, there are musicians in Kinshasa" isn't, on its face, all that engaging.

What if you did it, though? What if you did a story on the careers of the members of the Kinshasa symphony orchestra? And let's say you managed to avoid the violence that likely appears in the histories of at least some members. What then? The musicians would still be objects, tools in your quest to tell a certain kind of story that isn't really about them but more about the readers you admonish.

One could argue that every sphere of coverage is structured by some kind of grand narrative that probably blinds us to intricacies that matter. National Security reporting, for instance, is infected with the government's perspective that, at the end of the day, its guardianship of the national well-being is paramount to the rights of those afflicted by its policies. The mainstream media never question the nobility and professionalism of the armed forces. There is always this underlying sense that foreign casualties do not matter and that the justice, if not the execution, of American goals is sound.

We're not going to get rid of structuring narratives—vis a vis Africa or American wars or anything else. Maybe we can replace the one we have now. What shall we replace it with?

Thanks for this thought-provoking writing.
— posted 08/03/2012 at 16:07 by Edna
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well this is almost as horrifying as the kipling poem
The scariest thing about it is that white Americans are now co-opting anti-racist rhetoric to prove the legitimacy of their racism. It's just insane. If you think you're the only person who can save Africans from people with white saviour complex or feel like you have a 'duty' to do so, you simply have a very advanced version of white saviour complex.
— posted 08/03/2012 at 16:24 by Andy
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pan-africanism & the american imagination
i'm just wondering to what extent pan-african rhetoric/ideology has shaped america's (warped) imagination of africa. there seem to be so many projections and impositions, with very limited real engagement with the continent and all its complexities.
— posted 08/03/2012 at 17:12 by Amanda
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I agree with this
As an African, I agree totally with this article.

The sad truth is that the West knows so little about Africa, because it has decided what it wants to know and has stubbornly stuck to that script for the past 400 years.

With the rise of social media, young Africans will craft an alternative narrative. As usual, the West will insist on sticking to tired cliches, but for the first time in 400 years, what the West thinks about Africa will not really matter.

That is what I look forward to.
— posted 08/03/2012 at 20:12 by Maduka
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I appreciate the piece, but it could have been about half as long. A rambling approach to make maybe three key points.
— posted 08/04/2012 at 00:43 by To a writer
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I agree with mwaf.
we tend to care so much about what they think of us... yet they persistently reduce our efforts to the works of black warring human species from a far away land. they happen to be so gud at it that most the Africans in the diaspora think the same of us.
— posted 08/04/2012 at 07:55 by marigi
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Chief Economist, Africa
I'm surprised you didn't mention the positive stories about Africa coming from economists, such as Steve Radelet, Ted Miguel, McKinsey's "Lions on the Move," The Economist's cover story "Africa Rising," and (excuse the self-promotion) my blog, "Africa Can" (http://blogs.worldbank.org/africacan). We need to reconcile these two competing narratives.
— posted 08/04/2012 at 17:44 by Shanta Devarajan
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Editor, Boston Review
Shanta: We published Ted Miguel\'s *Africa\'s Turn* in 2008. It is listed in the right column on related articles.

Josh
— posted 08/04/2012 at 19:10 by Joshua Cohen
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I second
comment #11.
— posted 08/04/2012 at 20:17 by laljoe
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"Meaningless" violence
This is an excellent piece of criticism. It reminds me of Phillip Gourevitch's masterful account of the Rwandan genocide (We Wish To Inform You That Tomorrow We Will Be Killed With Our Families). Near the middle of the book, he delivers his most astute commentary:

"[W]e seem to have a hard time taking seriously the notion that places where mass violence and suffering is so widespread that it is casually called 'meaningless' might also be places where people engage in meaningful politics."

Then, a bit later, he riffs on an academic history of civil wars that argues that civil wars in the late 20th century are "about nothing at all.":

"...It would be nice, we may say, if the natives out there settled down, but if they're just fighting for the hell of it, it's not my problem.

But it is our problem. By denying the particularity of people who are making history, and the possibility they might have politics, Enzensberger mistakes his failure to recognize what is at stake in events for the nature of those events. So he sees chaos -- what is given off, not what's giving it off -- and his analysis begs the question: when, in fact, there are ideological differences between two warring parties, how are we to judge them? In the case of Rwanda, to embrace the idea that the civil war was a free-for-all -- in which everyone is at once equally legitimate and equally illegitimate -- is to ally oneself with Hutu Power's ideology of genocide as self-defense."

— posted 08/05/2012 at 19:25 by David Eads
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White?
I Suppose white Africans don't count as real Africans here...
— posted 08/05/2012 at 20:11 by Anon
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Reworking the way we cover Africa
Great article. If you are interested in this issue of how the West covers Africa, you should check out The Cola Road, a documentary currently being shot in Zambia, looking at a new aid distribution model. We are working to ensure that the film is empowering to those involved, rather than the typical model of journalists coming in and taking little consideration of the people they cover.

Read more about it here:
http://www.facebook.com/TheColaRoad
— posted 08/06/2012 at 07:15 by The Cola Road
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I enjoy reading your work/blog and agree with much of what you say. But I often find myself feeling totally foreign to the debate because often it seems to be an American writing about how Americans write about Africa. It's an interesting theme, but I sometimes feel it has far less to do with Africa than with modern America. I'm puzzled by the massive debates that rage around what Gettleman and the other guy are saying about Congo, because the seem so internal to USA. I think if you spend enough time living in an African country and do your best to break out of the expat social circles, you start losing touch with what 'Africa' means back in the West and you can start telling stories more authentically.
— posted 08/06/2012 at 17:58 by John James
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You have repeated the paternalism you berate
A tiresomely moralistic, if not ultimately pathetic essay. This article joins the gargantuan pile of articles coming out of the western media feigning to have finally recognised the epidemical parochialism they have peddled concerning Africa for decades. We have the incredibility of Kony2012 to thank for this recent surge of pseudo-awakening in the West. Yet all these articles purvey the same insidious paternalism against which they vehemently rail.
The author here,styling herself as an occupier of the moral high ground, proceeds, through a litany of allusions to sundry anecdotes downloaded from African studies 101(Heart of Darkness,Ota Benga etc) to make the astounding position that it is, in fact, the responsibility of the West to frame the African narrative.

The author writes :"The responsibility to change our image of Africa doesn’t lie solely with the few journalists feeding the beast. It also lies with media consumers—readers and listeners and viewers—patronizing our media institutions with money or attention or clicks. Together, we should demand of ourselves that we take an imaginative leap and acknowledge something other than suffering as worthy of our attention."

It is breathtaking to realise that the author has failed to identify the obvious yet vital point that Africans simply want to tell their own stories. We do not require a re-organisation of the Western media machine, we need it to release authority to the people whose voices should be amplified the most.
The author is resistant to such a move, getting defensive as she writes :
It’s a suggestion many applauded, if not because it might actually solve the problem, then because it demanded that African voices tell Africa’s stories.
But this distracts from the real problem by assuming that American news is bad because Americans are foreigners, and that natives would tell it better because they’re, well, native.

I'm not going to talk about the author's choice to use the word native,which evokes the bestial Heart of Darkness imagery she manifestly wishes to disinfect from the western imagination. I will, however, remind the author of the fundamental point that her essay has missed:

The "natives" want to tell their "native" stories. It really is that simple.
— posted 08/07/2012 at 09:22 by Humble African
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Let's Keep Perspective
If no one ever reported about any group of people except the groups he or she belonged to, much journalism would disappear.

No one's saying Africans (or anyone else) can't tell their own stories. The author takes care to make the point that Africans, and African experiences, are not one-dimensional.

In the wide world of All Stories, some stories will be told secondhand. This article is about the subset of secondhand stories told by white journalists. It does not say Africans can't, shouldn't, or won't tell their stories firsthand as well. Let's be clear about the difference there.

— posted 08/08/2012 at 20:17 by Humble Writer
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Retired Prof
"So why, then, if you’re reading or watching most American news, do you tend to see the same simplified stories over and over again?" Easy - because that's what brings in the advertising dollars. More accuracy might offend some potential advertisers. In a word - our plutocracy.
— posted 08/12/2012 at 21:23 by Frank Williams
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Journalists need to practice self-censorship
It's up to editors and journalists to scotch "bad news" stories from Africa, so that only positive things get published. "Most African women not raped this week" or "Many Africans not killing each other at the moment". When it is impossible to suppress negative stories, emphasize the "root cause": white racism.

Hey, it works in the US!
— posted 08/14/2012 at 12:36 by Doug1943
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Good job
A very good article. Kudos to the authors.
In some point, I agree with wmaf. Maybe not all, but it's true that vast majority of Westerners use Africa as indistinguishable mash of humanity. Here were I live in [Swiss] if a Nigerian, a Kenyan or any African does something, they just call African not a Kenyan, Ethiopian or Nigerian as if Africa is not a continent but a single country. Here in Europe, they use similar things with Balkans and Arabs, too.
Anyway, as Dakar-Amsterdam said, if you want to portray the true Africa get out of the cities, listen to the ordinary people and take them serious.
— posted 08/14/2012 at 15:44 by Daniel
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Get down from the pedestal
True...white, black or brown...anybody who writes about Africa needs to get down from the pedestal and write about Africa as just another place and not a war torn, suffering continent which needs help...there are bad things happening here...so are they happening in Europe and America and Asia...and like other places there are people getting married...kids attending first day at school...students graduating from colleges and youngsters going for their first day at work..there are beautiful sunrises and breathtaking waterfalls...there are hardworking fathers and caring mothers..there are loving grandparents and naughty grandchildren...we need to find them amidst the bombings and rapes which are really not as frequent and as widespread as sometimes the stories would make us believe..
— posted 08/14/2012 at 20:01 by Parag
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uneasy
I liked this, then uneasily reread this passage:

"We like these stories because at some level, we already know them, and because they tell us we are caring, and potentially powerful, people."

Did I like this article because it told me I am caring and potentially powerful (in some "new and different" way) when it comes to framing Africa? Maybe.

Hmm.
— posted 08/17/2012 at 00:19 by Erin
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@Humble African-comment#21...this is the best comment about the article
— posted 08/17/2012 at 04:39 by brendan
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response to Humble African
Your passion is palpable and admirable, but you have missed the point.

First of all, the word "native" has the opposite sense of the word "foreign." What is happening here is not a recycling of paternalistic rhetoric, but an economical use of language. There isn't a better word for conveying the opposite sense of "foreign." Would you prefer "indigenous"? I very much doubt that the author intends to transmit any of the baggage you associate with the word. In some contexts, you would be right. In this context, you are finding harms where they don't exist.

More important, you seem to think that the author is opposed to Africans telling their own stories, but she is explicitly not. You need only read the article more carefully or with a more sympathetic eye to see that. She is instead saying that foreign writers, publishers, and readers have created a burdensome narrative and African writers should not have to bear, on their own, the additional burden of undoing it.

Every writer frames things. That is not only unavoidable—it is the point of writing. And foreign people, white people, are going to continue to write about Africa. As long as those foreign people are writing about Africa, they should do a better job of it. That's all Moore wants. To suggest that she is no better than the paternalists who came before her is not only obviously hyperbolic—how many plantations does she own? how many slaves has she whipped? how many Africans has she preached the white man's gospel to?—but unkind. You, evidently no stranger yourself to the moral high ground, insult her with accusations of Africana 101–level simplification, yet if you took a moment to survey her work, you'd see that she has a deep, informed, and sensitive understanding of her craft.

If you'd prefer that non-Africans simply never write about Africa, then your preferences are impractical. Let's instead think about how reality might be improved, not replaced with dreams.
— posted 08/17/2012 at 16:02 by Humble American
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calling people racist
Calling people "racists" is a defeatist approach stemming from one's own prejudices. It takes one to know one... If Africans or anyone else want to change perceptions, then DO something. Build an economy, a political system that isn't corrupt. Stop whinging and get to work, or you will just prove the negative stereotypes are true.
— posted 08/19/2012 at 01:38 by sorina
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Africa
I myself am an African and believe that many "1st world" countries look down on Africa and see Africans as people who are less than others. Africans are exploited daily and hold minerals in their hands which they will never hold. Africa can above all, boast of our strong cultural and rooted past, we also can boast of our richly blessed earth holding minerals.
Yes, Africans have suffered from wars and social and political issues but one thing Africans have managed, is too keep moving.
— posted 08/23/2012 at 18:18 by Nqobile Nzimande
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Examples of good and bad America/Africa collaboration on specific stories?
Great article and discussion - thanks.

I know both Americans and Africans who write clichés about Africa, as well as people from both continents who go beyond them. Everybody has their own personal agenda, finally - a lot of the challenge is just find good international colleagues to work with, who help bring our work up instead of down. What good or bad experiences do people have with this kind of collaboration? Two of my own stories from the last week: a disappointing one (http://spin-doctors.tumblr.com/post/30200297750/rundu-this-week-i-interrupted-my-regularly) and a satisfying one (http://spin-doctors.tumblr.com/post/30295226173/windhoek-first-things-first-we-ran-into-this).

I'm actually a Canadian NGO worker in Namibia, and you can imagine we face similar challenges to foreign journalists - some much worse. One line from a U.S. novelist, Tobias Wolff, has always struck me as a good warning to help guide all of us in our writing: "It takes a childish or corrupt imagination to make symbols of other people."

People might also be interested in this Aug. 26 Guardian piece, "Our image of Africa is hopelessly obsolete": http://www.guardian.co.uk/commentisfree/2012/aug/26/ian-birrell-emergence-new-africa
— posted 08/27/2012 at 05:14 by Spin Doctors
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Is not talking about race or racism the right/best way to move forward?
I read this article weeks ago and had to sit and think about it. Moore and I are allies because we share a similar goal of diversifying news from Africa as well as a similar critique of Western mainstream and alternative news coverage. But our approach couldn't be more different. Ultimately, I'd like to understand: how is it possible to write an essay about Western representations of Africa without ever mentioning race, racism or white supremacy?

Perhaps they don't need to be mentioned? I'm open to that possibility. I'd like to understand the rationale however.

My reaction to Moore's piece is below. I'd love it if anyone answered my question.

http://develophaiti.wordpress.com/2012/08/26/the-white-correspondents-burden-a-diaspora-response/
— posted 08/27/2012 at 23:54 by Carla
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Africa will evolve well naturally as long as we understand their wise and humanistic values
As the oakland institutes video of the Herakles blackrock palm oil debarcacle reveals ,its pretty bad when you dont do minimum due diligence.one dosnt want to scare investors away with the lack of transparency that this highlights but this is the main wrong atitude of the west ,that you can ride rough shod over populations imerterial of race colur or creed in the name of profit .it happeded in america and australia parts of afica but it aint going to continue and registered public companies and private ones should wake up to this fact.if 40% of the countrys palm oil is supplied by private poor farmers you better invest in the machines roads transport rent it out and make a fair profit that way instead and if thats too complicated your not worth the name investor.with local banks only offering 5 year 11'% upwards interestd over loans of only up to 5% of what the guarentee property will be worth for the "native " on assets in the country snails pace growth will only be attained (but i we invite you all for a drink at the opening!) when you want to do any normal 2$ mill type of growth investment especially when half the countries arnt in the OCED radar of allowerble capital trnsfer rigmerole someone is doing a very sloppy job .please reply if you know real bankers interested in african buisness
— posted 09/09/2012 at 14:47 by Phyrne
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Why Racism Often Isn't Said Directly
@Carla I read your article and commented there but I thought I would also cross-post here.
The answer often given for why racism isn't discussed in exactly those words is because once the word is actually used, people often shut off and no longer really listen or question themselves in the way you intend. This does not mean, however, that people shouldn't be confronted when warranted. There are many ways of still speaking up: http://www.creativespirits.info/aboriginalculture/people/how-to-deal-with-racist-people and http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0Ti-gkJiXc .
It is of course up to individuals to decide what means they feel comfortable with but I would hope that the objective - the other person(s) questioning themself and growing beyond - is always kept in mind as the primary goal of such discussions.
As to the article itself, I commend the author as this is a hard topic to write about. As I have written elsewhere, this perception of Africa hinders the continent in tangible ways; it affects economics, politics, business, societies, in addition to personal identities.
The one critique I would make is that no studies are cited and the term for this negative perception, Afro-pessimism, isn't mentioned once. There is significant literature on the topic and yet no mention is made. Regardless, still an excellent personal reflection and (likely) introduction for many.
Finally, cudos for having Shanta Devarajan comment on your post!
— posted 03/20/2013 at 01:34 by Victoria Schorr
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Why Racism Often Isn't Said Directly
Correction: Meant to write that Afro-pessimism is mentioned ^only once.
MY apologies.
— posted 03/20/2013 at 01:37 by Victoria Schorr
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This is brilliant...reminds me of Ngugi Wa Thiong'o's 'Remembering Africa'
I have read so many write uos and articles about Africa/Africans and for a while there, I felt that I could never read another article written by a westerner. Simply because they mostly carried a paternalistic attitude and ethnocentric perspective. I recently read a failed attempt at Juxtaposing Chinua Achebe's life with the Nairobi Half Life movie...I felt sick. Eventually the article talked more about/showed how far removed the writer was from the reality of the subject of her story. Eventually, It turned into her life and how good she had it hob nobiing with dignitaries in embassy parties.

However, this article seems balanced enough and can be a launching pad to writting about Africa. Yes, we, the Africans, if asked, can provide the missing link to a story that captures the spirit of Africa. We live these stories and also witness these stories.
— posted 04/02/2013 at 12:47 by Winnie
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Jina Moore’s freelance work has appeared in the Christian Science Monitor, Foreign Policy, Newsweek, and Best American Science Writing (2009), as well as on public radio programs. She blogs at jinamoore.com.

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